This was good. This story gives us a full story of Elise's mission. But there's one thing i don't understand, how come Dan is only mentioned in this this but doesn't appear in this? But still, good job! If Dan did appear, then I'm sorry. I read too fast a lot.
Last Edit: Dec 17, 2019 14:39:29 GMT -7 by Deleted
This was good. This story gives us a full story of Elise's mission. But there's one thing i don't understand, how come Dan is only mentioned in this this but doesn't appear in this? But still, good job! If Dan did appear, then I'm sorry. I read too fast a lot.
Nah, he didnt appear. It was based on a writing prompt and Dan wasnt really the topic, Elise was. I just figured since the show is "Dan Vs" I'd at least shout him out.